Line by Line Contest – Line #6

20 Jan

Wow! I made it thru another week at Karen Tabke’s First Line Contest!

If you’re just checking this out for the first time, here’s the low down: The 1st 100 people to post get to play. The first 2 weeks they cut 20 people each and then every week after that they cut 6….and I’m still in!!! Woot! 

Seven lockers down, my boyfriend was making out with Cheryl, the way-too-perky head cheerleader.


I tried not to stare, but when his hand slid past her waist and over her hip, I slammed my locker shut and stormed off in the opposite direction. Not that anyone noticed. The problem – not only was I that gorgeous jock’s secret girlfriend, I also had a secret power.


I’m invisible.

Ok, not invisible invisible.


What do you think comes next? Do you think I’ll make the cut again? Will AJ Chase kill off my heroine in the comments this week? Let me know!

4 Responses to “Line by Line Contest – Line #6”

  1. talesfromthecrit January 20, 2009 at 10:11 am #

    Just mostly invisible, well, I mean, when I say invisible I really mean something else entirely, like, kind of invisible like the way that chick at the party who never says anything but then blurts out something random at the end of the party while everyone is leaving invisible.

  2. briaq January 20, 2009 at 10:17 am #

    AJ *snort*

    Yeah, there’s no chance of me accidentally stealing that one 🙂

    but you definitely had me laughing!

  3. talesfromthecrit January 21, 2009 at 9:57 am #

    I write tight like that, yo.

  4. Kaige January 21, 2009 at 4:35 pm #

    Nice, AJ. 🙂

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