Write My Second Line :)

16 Dec

If you clicked over to Karin Tabke ‘s blog when you saw I made the first cut in the First Line contest, then you know what my first line is. For those who didn’t:


 Seven lockers down, my boyfriend was making out with Cheryl, the way-too-perky head cheerleader.


I know what my next line is, but I’d love to hear what you think it should be 🙂

8 Responses to “Write My Second Line :)”

  1. Shanna December 16, 2008 at 10:42 am #

    I walked up to them as they were still sucking face; I pulled them apart, then slapped him in the face, and threw Cheryl to the ground.

    Too violent? LOL

  2. briaq December 16, 2008 at 10:50 am #

    LOL – ok, that’s what I might do — but not Amy!

    Oh, and nice use of the semi-colon…working that one sentence minimum!

  3. gwen hayes December 16, 2008 at 1:18 pm #

    I could cheat here. Really I could.

  4. briaq December 16, 2008 at 1:31 pm #

    You totally could, but when i went line by line — I scratched line two out — it was obvious line 3 was stronger and should be line two 🙂

    HEY, now’s your chance to make an Amy you like more

    Have a great day miz g

  5. Unhinged (Andi) December 16, 2008 at 9:27 pm #

    Holy crap, what’s her boyfriend doing making out with another girl?!

    (Yeah, I’m still here, still reading. Go, bria!!!!!!)

    Hey, I don’t know what the next line should be. That’s why YOU’RE the writer…


  6. briaq December 16, 2008 at 10:27 pm #

    Hey Andi — long time no see! Hope you’re holidays are going well — Or, um went well by the time you read this 🙂

  7. Celise December 17, 2008 at 5:43 pm #

    Here’s my take:

    Taking my running shoe out of my bag, I lob it at his head.

  8. briaq December 17, 2008 at 6:50 pm #

    Another good guess since Amy’s a competitive runner — but no.

    She’s got some “stuff” right now.

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