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Publishing Blogs Weekly Round-Up October 31, 2008

Honestly, this was sitting in my draft section. I forgot it was Friday :)

 

A new agency blog came on the scene. Check out Waxman Agency’s first posts at waxmanagency.wordpress.com. They’re already attacking some heavy issues over there — Like REJECTION and why you might be getting hit with them.

 

Kate Elliot has a great blog on Theme where she teaches us some important things: (1) She plans themes (2) Themes sometimes appear (3) She’s shallow and likes writing about handsome men — Well, duh.

 

For those of you who are always asking “Why do I need an agent?” John Scalzi has yet another reason he refers to as Free Money.

 

One more reason to love Jessica Faust….. I really wish she wanted Traditional Fantasies that were YA.

 

And, of course, the google settlement had to be mentioned. If you don’t know what it is, you need to check this out. google has an interesting way of interperting copy right laws and how they effect the people who have slaved over books for years.  I picked Nathan Bransford’s blog on it. He was kind enough to link also.

 

My New Best Advice For Writers October 30, 2008

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Write your own craft book/tool.

 

I know you’re thinking ‘WHAT? If I could write my own craft book, why would I be searching for writing information online?’

 

You know the old saying about not knowing a topic until you can teach it? It’s turning out to be more true than I could ever have  known. The process alone is worth the effort even if you go no further with your project than self-use.

 

Several weeks ago I wrote about my Edit Cards system HERE and after several questions wrote a second, clarifying blog HERE. On the encouragement of a few people, I decided to try to make the system user-friendly for people who are not me and see if it might be something to market here as an editing tool.

 

So, here I am in the midst of streamlining, editing, elucidating and organizing cards by topic/edit sweep and what have I learned?

  1. This process really does work for me
  2. I think I have something simple that will work for others as well 
  3. My current personal editing issues are not the only ones to study
  4. I can streamline my own editing process further
  5. I can create few edit mini-passes with that streamlined process
  6. Grouping the topics is forcing me to analyze HOW I edit, not just WHAT I edit.
  7. Several editing issues are repetitive
  8. Knowing a process inside and out simplifies it
  9. Being forced to explain not only WHY you need to do something, but HOW forces you to look at your own writing style

 

Some of those may sound repetitive, but they aren’t if you dig underneath the main issue.

 

For example, streamlining the process and grouping the topics. I looked at those to issues at the same time in an effort to cut a possible 120 cards at least in half. In doing this, I looked at which things I did in one mini-pass.

 

So, a mini-pass might have included Weak, Repetitive Place Holding Actions —> Smiled, Nodded, Turned, Crossed, Frowned, Shrugged, Laughed.

 

Instead of creating a card for each, I created one card for that topic. On the back I have the WHY, the HOW, EXAMPLES and a space for other users to add their common words.

 

As I work on this project while I continue to write and critique for others I’m picking up things in my writing that are becoming innate writing actions instead of editing issues later. I’m also picking up editing issues that aren’t typical ones for me. Well, at least not now. Maybe they were in the past. Maybe the will be in the future, but in making a general tool, I’m forced to study those topics and learn their HOW and WHY also.

 

All in all, this has been an amazing process and even if my Edit Card guinea pigs look at it and say, “um, no” I’ve learned more about editing and how I can do it better than I probably would have in 10 hours of craft workshops.

 

Agents Who Blog October 29, 2008

Here is a list in no specific order of the agents that blog who I check out on a regular basis. Of course I’d love to add anyone I missed and should be reading. Hope you find it helpful!

 

Nathan Bransford, Curtis Brown
http://www.nathanbransford.blogspot.com/

 

Caren Johnson Literary Agency
http://johnsonlitagency.wordpress.com/

 

Jessica Faust
http://bookendslitagency.blogspot.com/
 

 

Janet Reid of Fine Print Literary Management:
http://www.jetreidliterary.blogspot.com/

 

Rachelle Gardner
http://cba-ramblings.blogspot.com/

 

The Knight Agency
http://knightagency.blogspot.com/

 

Deidre Knight, TKA
http://www.deidreknight.blogspot.com/

 

Nephele Tempest, TKA
http://nephele.livejournal.com/

 

Kristen Nelson
http://pubrants.blogspot.com/

 

Waxman Agency
http://waxmanagency.wordpress.com/

 

Jennifer Jackson of Donald Maas Agency
http://arcaedia.livejournal.com/

 

Lyons Literary LLC
http://lyonsliterary.blogspot.com/

 

Colleen Lindsay from FinePrint
http://theswivet.blogspot.com/

 

KT Public Relations & Literary
http://newliteraryagents.blogspot.com/

Wylie-Merrick Literary Agency
http://blog.wylie-merrick.com/

 

Sarah Crowe and her authors
http://acrowesnest.blogspot.com/

 

Dystel & Goderick Lit
http://dglm.blogspot.com/

 

Elizabeth Jote at Objective Entertainment
http://elizabethjote.wordpress.com/

 

Jenny Rappaport of L. Perkins Agency
http://litsoup.blogspot.com/

 

Laurie McLean
http://www.agentsavant.com/as/index.cfm

 

Rachel Vater
http://raleva31.livejournal.com/

 

Lucienne Diver of TKA
http://varkat.livejournal.com

 

Dianna Fox
http://dianafox.livejournal.com/

 

Mind Nap – The Ongoing Saga October 28, 2008

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It’s amazing what happens when you give yourself permission to NOT do something.

 

Like write.

 

I’ve been popping into my “Ideas” folder all weekend with different ways to go in the next project — and new Next Projects.

 

I have a couple favorites and am really wondering which is going to spring forward as the lead horse.

 

I have decided that it will either be Book Two (otherwise known as Moon Marked or M2 to mamad) OR something completely different in the YA category – NOT a Traditional Fantasy. I cannot tell you how many people have said “Is it an Urban Fantasy?” Which makes me think, should it be?

 

I understand Urban Fantasies are hot right now. I even know the idea I had has been put into the works for an upcoming book by a Published Author (I’m feeling the Caps today) so I put that aside. But part of the Mind Nap time is figuring out what’s the best move for my writing career.

 

Is it easier to shop an Urban Fantasy than a Traditional Fantasy? I’m thinking the answer to that right now is: yes. I’ve had several people who have looked at the first chapters or the query for Markbearer want to know if it could be shifted to an UF. Anyone who writes Traditional knows you can’t just throw out your entire basis and make the story happen in this world, at this time – EVERYTHING would change: motivation, goals, influences, laws, rules, religions, culture….even things that sound minor like how people move, talk, dress etc.

 

But, it brings a question to the forefront that isn’t necessarily an easy one to answer –> do you/should you write to the market. Everyone says write what you love and write a great book, but is that really always enough?

 

I do have some UF ideas going on, as well as a futuristic that may or may not be YA and then some straight YA….and of course the Traditional Fantasy series I’m writing. So, where will this Mind Nap bring me when I’m done? I wish you’d tell me.

 

That’s a great idea — You tell me! What should I write next :)

 

Mind Nap October 27, 2008

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As someone who is constantly telling herself little stories in her head, I’m wondering today how to know when to take a writing break.

 

I once heard a very popular -not to mention prolific- writer say something along the lines of “When I’m writing that’s all I do, but for a couple months between books, I do everything else.” She went on to clarify that everything else was not plotting and editing. Those are part of her writing schedule. She meant being a wife, mom, person….doing all the things that writing takes to much time do do. Takes up a new hobby or restarts an old one.

 

So, during Fast Draft, you may remember me saying that it just wasn’t going as well as it typically did and one of the reasons I came up with was that I hadn’t been far enough into the story to be running at break-neck Fast Draft speed. I think another reason is I was only able to take a couple days off before I started from all writing activity.

 

And so now, with NaNo right around the corner, people keep asking if I’m Nano’ing and what I’m working on. Is book 2 almost done (my personal favorite)? Are you still working on more than one thing? And a ton of other questions. And I find myself getting odd stares (or cyber-stares) when I say I’m not working on anything, I don’t think I’ll NaNo (I never have before) and I’m just kind of ‘feeling out’ some stories.

 

Taking a break doesn’t seem to be the norm in the writing world…But then I remember my Vows To Myself from when I was a Purple Heart. I remember saying I would treat writing like a job….INCLUDING scheduled breaks to avoid burnout. So here I am….scheduled breaking….and I’m unsure when I’ll start writing again. I think I need to play a little with the stories in my head and see where they go. Relearn to listen to my characters.

 

And so I ask you — breaks, do you take them? How do you take them, scheduled? What do you do while you aren’t Writing? How long are your breaks? I’d love to know!

 

Publishing Blogs Weekly Round-Up October 24, 2008

Filed under: Weekly Blog Round Up, Writing, editing, publishing — briaq @ 4:12 pm

OK, still sick so short and sweet. Here we go….

 

Of course you all love Nathan Bransford’s blog as much as I do, so I KNOW you already checked out his guest bloggers this week. If not, here’s Part One on How To Promote Your Book.

 

Genevieve Valentine blogged about the 10 Fantasy Movies That Ruined It for the Rest of Us. Twilighters – don’t hate me for linking here :)

 

Jessica Faust asked people what they learned from criticism - definitely check out the comments.

 

Joanna Bourne does amazing blogs. This week she did a Best of the Worst with how to do things and not do things – examples included. POV, metaphors and cliches are just a few to mention :)

 

And the Word Strumpet did a fun blog on the superficial. How do you know if you’re being superficial, huh?

 

Well, I hit all my tried and true stops in the blogging world – Do YOU have a blog? Am I missing out on something great by not knowing about it? Tell me!

 

I’m off to take more cough medicine. Enjoy!

 

Polling October 24, 2008

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I have to admit – I find it amazingly amusing that my “I’m sick and not blogging this week so I’ll just try this new poll function” poll got such a small response — especially considering it was looked at from over 60 independent sources and viewed over 100 times. And only 15 people could be bothered to click a button…. brings us all straight back to the “Who Are You People” blog, doesn’t it?

:)

 

POLL: Best Book-To-Movie Book October 21, 2008

As you saw if you read last night’s blog, I went to see Nick and Norah yesterday and reviewed it HERE. Which got me thinking which movie might be the Best YA Friendly Book-to-Movie Book.

 

I think we know who all the colin firth people will be voting for today? But are there enough other fans out there to even out the poll?

 

 

Nick & Norah’s Infinite Movie October 20, 2008

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OK, I LOVED this book. I thought it was clever and insightful and yes, crude in some places. The guys who were gay – were Gay. The guys who were straight were Straight. There were amazing lines and funny events and it was about the adventure of two people finding one another in one of those fabulous “One Night In…” stories.

 

And then I went to the movie wondering how it would get that PG-13 movie. Let me just say it now: HERE BE SPOILERS.

 

Shall we discuss?

 

OK, no one kisses who isn’t opposite gender. Now, I’m a nice Christian girl blah blah blah — but I’m also a writer. If you’re going to do a book that takes place around the members of a gay underground garage high school punk/emo/whatever they’re calling it this decade band – then the guys who are gay should be, well, um gay. I’m definitely NOT looking for stereotypes here – thanks for avoiding those, but COME ON. Be true to the characters in the book. Dev, the male slut of the book – smiles a lot at the guy he picks up. Isn’t that nice?

A good 1/5 of the movie is in Caroline’s POV — Um, yeah. Where’d THAT come from and why would anyone want to hang out with her anyway — was that their “We’re going to show drinking is really bad so we can justify making a movie where teens are in bars” point?

Oh, the scene in the bathroom with Norah and Tris when Norah’s feeling less than confident – never happens.

The elevator and ice room and hotel adventure – never happens.

The ‘what the heck are we doing’ moment in the closet – never happens.

The learning to let go and dance thing – never happens.

The quote about the Beatles – 1/2 happens and thus is ruined.

I could go on, but I won’t.

 

Basically, if you liked the characters and would like to see a COMPLETELY DIFFERENT Night In The Life …. go see the movie. The quest for Where’s Fluffy is cute, but pulls the whole idea of what the book was really about away.

 

If you want to see the book on film. Read the book again and picture things in your head as you go.

 

If you think I’m wrong – let me know. Or go vote for Nick & Norah on my POLL.

 

Fast Draft – The Recovery October 20, 2008

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Fast Draft is over and this is the first time I walked away knowing I’d toss most of it.

 

On the upside, I have a great first line for a different book, just nothing else. Um, does that count?

 

What I did find out is that I need to be 2-4 chapters into a book before I start fast drafting. For me, I need to have the feel of it, the hard get started stuff, on the page to really be able to let go and FD.  I walked away last night with the “oh good, that’s done” part knowing I’m going to have to do it again because all I did was learn what I don’t want to do in this book.

 

But, that’s HUGE in and of itself. I figured out where I want the parallels with book one to run. I realized that I need to write the 2nd third of the book first to line up the simultaneous events. I realized that the twins are starting to blend to closely. I know that the heroine of book two is much more mischievous than I thought she was and to stop holding her back. Character is SO important to me. I think that’s one of the best things about FD is meeting your character’s really quickly. Getting in their heads. Living in their bodies. Finding new ways for them to do things you need them to do that are more “them.”

 

So, pages —> Not so much.

Focus —> Right on. And sometimes, that’s what you really need, to refocus and learn what to throw out.

 

One really interesting thing I saw (for myself) is that stuff I would have kept and not known to throw out until my 3rd or 4th read on Book One, got tossed immediately this time. So, if that’s all I learned in this process, how to sort through my own thoughts quicker, that’s great and I’m amazingly pleased.

 

Ok, off to write!

 

Guest Blogging October 18, 2008

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I was lucky enough to get invited over at the Fictionistas to Guest Blog on how high school and writing are alike.

 

Stop by and comment!!!

 

Publishing Blogs Weekly Round-Up October 17, 2008

Welcome to another week of Round-Up.

 

As always, Janet Reid gave great advice in her post 6 Things I Never Want To See In A Query Letter Again….It’s the “again” that gets me with its implications.

 

Check out The Crowe’s Nest. This week Sandra Mitchell wrote about creating your own press kit. Definitely worth checking out HERE.

 

Over at the Swivet, Guest blogger Courtney Summers on how rejections can be a positive thing. Very inspirational – trust the timing, trust your judgement.

 

More updates from Caren Johnson and her group about their new agent and and what’s going on at their agency. Check them out HERE.

 

It’s funny the things you begin to take for granted. Check out some of those things and their reasons with Jessica Faust in her blog WHY?

 

I’m Easily Excited October 17, 2008

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By what you may ask?

 

By the fact that it’s Friday morning and I’ve had a bunch of search hits for “Weekly Round-Up”!! It’s been happening the last couple weeks, but I just wanted to say – IT’S COMING THIS AFTERNOON – sorry. I’m working a contract in the mornings this week.

 

Thanks to all who are stopping by (wow, the numbers) and it will be up mid-dayish.

 

Inspiration – Share The Love October 16, 2008

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I know the price of success: dedication, hard work, and an unremitting devotion to the things you want to see happen.
— Frank Lloyd Wright

 

That popped into my email box this morning, and not a second too soon.  Share your most inspiring quotations

 

Word Notebook October 14, 2008

For those of you playing along at home, you’ll remember my undying love went out to Charlotte at Word Strumpet for her series on VERBS!

 

Just to double say somethings she said *grin* I also have the Roget’s Thesaurus (1977 AND 2006 versions – don’t ask, i can’t explain it and you can’t have one). If you don’t already have a theme thesaurus, run to the car, speed to the nearest bookstore and push that old lady out of line in front of you to get it. Why it’s better than just a regular thesaurus: Have you ever had that feeling that the thesaurus got you closer, but you just can’t figure out the word you want to use. The one you’re using now is fine, it works, but there’s a connotation or just a little glide to the right or left that’s missing?

The theme thesaurus lets you see other “ideas” for a lack of better word around the idea you’re working with. Sometimes it gets you into a reference word you wouldn’t have thought of and brings you exactly where you want to be.  AND as a bonus, writers can kill hours playing with it.

My one thesaurus word of warning: Sometimes the obvious word is the best choice. Sometimes going further and further afield stops the reader, even if it’s in the “HEY! That’s a great word” way, it still stopped the reader.

 

OK, now own to our regularly scheduled program.

 

Ms. Strumpet (I can’t call her Word, we aren’t on a first name basis yet) blogged during her VERB series about her Word Book – I too had a word book and couldn’t help myself from chiming in. If you write and you don’t have one – go get one.

 

The lovely picture above is my Word Book. If you look closely, you’ll see that the edges are sectioned in different colors. Whoever thought of that at the pocket-size notebook company is a genius. So, lets talk sections!

 

Section One: BLUE

This section has my verbs. If you were smart enough (and I know you were) to check out the verb series I referenced above, you’ll know (or maybe, since you’re so smart, you already knew) weak verbs are not your friend. So, I have a list of verbs I just love. Strong, beautiful words that struck me and I wanted to keep. Sometimes, if I saw them used particularly well, I’d write out the sentence and note the book and page i saw it in. 

 

Section Two: RED

The next part is my Over Used Verbs pages. At the top of the page is the Overused Word and then a list of words I’m collecting to replace them.

 

Section Three: GREEN

Lights. Camera. ACTION!!! To stop everyone from shrugging/sighing/smiling/laughing, I have a section where I collect more unique actions.  The little flags on these pages sorts things by emotion and there’s also a section just for “something different” — Not only do I grab great things I’ve seen written or heard in movies, but I grab them from people on the street. Want to know the MOST fun way to do this?

Grab a buddy — no, not that buddy. she’s a  writer too. Go find a buddy who ISN’T a writer. Yeah, her. She’ll do. Now, tell her you’re going to play a game and you’ll pay for the coffee and cookies. Find a great people watching spot and hand her a note book (you need one too) and tell her to write down all the actions she sees and what (if anything) she interprets them as meaning. Trust me, bring the non-writer! I found my writer friends are all trying to figure out how to say it best instead of quickly and moving on. I played this game once with someone who sketched me quick pictures and emotional responses!

 

Section Four:  PURPLE

Words! Words! Words! No idea what to do with them, but words I loved either because of their sound, they way the looked, a unique or surprising meaning or an etymology that was really fun to play with. This is where things get a little lost, but sometimes paging through here and just reading stuff gets my brain reving again.

 

So, if you have a Word Book, how do you set it up? What’s in it? Is it useful? AND, most important (because, really, it’s all about me) what should I be doing that I’m not.